Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bad Luck Businessman]

My 2 cents.

Quality in this was lacking consistency. It had times when it looked like you spent some time to draw while others it looked like you put in 5 mins of time max.

The music quality was lacking as well.

You did try and sync the audio with what was going on, so I will give you that.

Most of the video I was beside myself wondering what the hell is going on, because it was a lot of random unfortunate events.

I think if you were to give the story... a little back ground it would help. For example if we knew he had an important meeting or closing sale thing he had to make it to.

[Your FIRED!]

Needs some work.

It was not all to horrible. I will not lie at times I was a little lost as to where the character was due to the incompleteness of the backgrounds. Like for example when he is told he is fired, it looks like his is near a filing cabinet but "outside" there are people in a playground?

I will say that the movement of the characters was fluid which was nice to see.

The plot all be it short was not all that bad, though a bit tragic, a failed attempt at suicide? I am not sure whether or not he killed himself I could not tell.

Just keep at it and you'll improve.

Oh and lol, did the gun fire the whole bullet? With the cartridge still attached :P?

Dbreth responds:

Oh it wasnt a playground it was sorta like a office place thingy and i dont really know about guns all i know is that they look like a L ._.