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Sticks.

Even for it being stick people i enjoyed this. The animations were all nicely done and all of them had a nice little story, keep up the good work guys!

A little over my head.

I am not big into SF, so I didn't get the entire joke but the animation was nice.

Liked

I enjoyed them all and I felt their lengths were just fine.

BillyNapalm responds:

Who likes short shorts?

YOU LIKE SHORT SHORTS.

First one.

First one of your flashes I have liked.

Rights you say.

To be honest I enjoyed it till it got all serious. It could have turned funny, if she actually did have a weapon in the end, and left the flash at that.

Oh and by the way you have no "right" to fly. That is like saying we all have the "right" to drive no matter how many DUI's or people we have hurt/killed.

Airlines are a business and they have a right to refuse service.

Well that being said, your art and animation were good to go and the plot you choose not too bad.

Salt?

Who puts salt on their sandwiches? :P

The mouth movements were very much in sync to the audio, so good on you there.

Simple yes, but I enjoyed it. Zoom in on face was a good choice.

Hmm...things to improve upon:

*Background: Umm make one, but beware. Dont make it look horrible. I know if you had drawn a shitty background in this flash it would have subtracted greatly with my experience.

I do think you could expand this flash a bit, add some plot. Perhaps make it a little devious and have him hunt down the practical joker who ruined his sandwich and exact revenge?

I do look forward to see you improve and grow as a flash maker.

MrKidNinja responds:

Dude...thanks a bunch! that review was awesome.

Interesting...but

Lol dude, I think you missed that point of what a trailer actually is.

They are suppost to be short around 30-60 seconds long.

Did what you wrote interest me? Yes.

However it was ungodly slow and the sideways scrolling bugged me...after the 5th time to so.

It looks like you ran out of time towards the end, because you just sticked to using a blk background lol?

Hmm

Looks interesting.

Rodcom1000 responds:

Thanks

Reaction

The door's reaction basically sums up how I felt about this video, Confused at first.

Best I can say is this, try and explain things better so people are left with the feeling with what the hell? Since if someone is feeling that then they sure as hell will not be laughing at this "comedy".

Some words were said after the door smaked the person but after replaying it twice I still could not catch it, so before submitting things try and make sure you watch it after stepping away. Since if you watch it right after you think your done you will most likely over look somethings.

Charm

I love the 8-bit charm this has.

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