Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Whoops, White John's Bad]

Better luck next go.

Your lip syncing was quite off, but you at least tried.

[Andrew's Birthday]

Ahhh!!

AHHHHH it burns!!! my Eyes for the love of god help me! The pun it's so cheesy!

*Curls into a ball in the middle of the floor and starts convulsing violently*

Well just wow...lol

I can't help you with that play on words lol.

Some advice:

The text of in-coming text message was there for too short of time, for someone to really read.

The "a" is cut in the final scene.

NGReviewEater responds:

Yeah I need to look into that incoming text message glitch. It's been bugging me and I can't exactly find the problem.

I'll also try to lengthen the time the message is displayed, but remember there's a dead battery in the phone!

Regarding the a in the final scene; for some reason it appears if you view the flash in full screen. I'll try to move the message so the a fits in.

Thanks for the review!

[- Final Countdown -]

Lol

Lol this begs the question, why were you banned and will you seek vengeance? :P

[extortion teleponic fail]

No comprende

Language barrier *sigh*

Though I can say the attempt at lip syncing was horrid at beast.

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[Loops turn into squares]

Different

Definitely different, an interesting take on perspective.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thanks

[Birthdays N zombies]

Pump it up!

I could barely hear the audio in this video even with my volume on max, it is something that needs to be fixed.

From what I could barely hear, the audio quality itself seemed fine just not enough volume.

The story via what I could barely hear and that i could see looked good.

[All Fired Up]

Free cents.

Some SFX would have been a nice touch.

The animation was by a default choppy, really cant be helped if doing frame by frame...unless you do a lot of frames :P

The art: a little basic and rough.

Story: Not all too bad. I did like the little sweeper at the end, nice personal touch there.

[Hitchhiker Helen]

Confused

The animations were good as well as the art.

Call me a realist but I find it funny how she just doesn't run to the left or right :P

Could you give me a little more insight onto the title?

The only thing i can come up with regards to hitchhiker is, that if she stops running she will become a hitchhiker by being crushed onto it?

IcemanClay responds:

This animation is basically a set assignment in which a character must escape from a serious/life threatening situation. Part of the assignment is to create a character along with a bio and background info.

Helen is a hitchhiker. She's returning from an expedition, when suddenly a boulder up a mountain breaks lose and comes towards her. She runs down the mountain to escape. She gets to the bottom. The boulder therefore slows down, just in time before it knocks her off the cliff. I suppose the rabbit was horny. She didn't run to the left or right because she was running in a straight line down the mountain :P