Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TmsT's "Spy & Pyro"]

Wow

I am impressed. The animations were very nice.

The ending by far blew me away, and I loved how it actually made (Sense) or lol I should say I completely understood how you came to that conclusion.

Very nice.

The only detractor for me was the pixelated backgrounds.

[The Hound clip]

Good start

The animations were pretty smooth.

The story does seem pretty interesting.

I think the Cat's dialog was a little on the lame side, and lol such a bad pun at the end.

To dissect your story, it really does not make any sense for the cat to go into an art room and then randomly start destroying things.

I've had the same problem when I write storys, about how to reveal things but I think there could have been a better way to revel his corrupt nature. Perhaps the Dog walking into his room and finding some plans? Though it is a little too late for that, I guess what I am trying to say is try and make the story believable. But of course that is only my personal opinion and writing style.

The biggest thing that had me lost for a moment was when he said "Son" to the other dog but I did catch that he was just using it as a false term of endearment.

Overall, it does make me want to see where this story is headed.

[Sky Kingdom: Promo]

Fixes...

I thought you were copying the idea of that intro, till your audio confirmed it.

As a Promo goes this was not very good.

The audio first and foremost was very bad, I'd hate to watch a series that had that bad a quality.

As well, as for a promo I don't know if you are going to completely copy Koncker's story or branch off or make your own.

The opening art itself was fine, but to end on that crappy castle was a bad decision.

scottwjsm responds:

i could fix the sound. maybe i will...

[Firefly's Wings]

Hmm...

While I can apprciate the time it takes to do things frame by frame...it was only a little yellow dot and then wings were later added.

Could you tell me more about how a firefly relates to tis song, as I don't quite see it.

Kittensinafryingpan responds:

Thanks and I'll try to do more complex animations and the song it's just a really good song that inspired this somehow.

[the Globe theatre]

Learning (It burns)

I loved how some of your facts were a bit redundant like, no pictures exist...kinda goes in hand with camera's exist.

There were times when the text on the screen was on for so short a time that it could not be read, though i can't be sure if that was not intentional with the speed you said things.

Some interesting facts yes but nothing all to amazing.

[Office Muffins]

really?

Wait 45 minutes for this? I wonder where all that time went into...

The joke itself is not all to bad but 46 minutes to make lol.

kokonut10 responds:

Huh?

[SUNNY DAYS]

Ha.

*Head explodes*

The expression of the sun is priceless lol.

All in all pretty strange lol but not at all a bad loop.

[Lionel & Janet Trailer]

It worked.

Mission accomplished.

I am interested ;P

One thing though, was it just me or did some of the slides seem out of order? But it could just be me, it has been a few years since I last read Romeo and Juliet.