Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Andrew's Birthday]

Ahhh!!

AHHHHH it burns!!! my Eyes for the love of god help me! The pun it's so cheesy!

*Curls into a ball in the middle of the floor and starts convulsing violently*

Well just wow...lol

I can't help you with that play on words lol.

Some advice:

The text of in-coming text message was there for too short of time, for someone to really read.

The "a" is cut in the final scene.

NGReviewEater responds:

Yeah I need to look into that incoming text message glitch. It's been bugging me and I can't exactly find the problem.

I'll also try to lengthen the time the message is displayed, but remember there's a dead battery in the phone!

Regarding the a in the final scene; for some reason it appears if you view the flash in full screen. I'll try to move the message so the a fits in.

Thanks for the review!

[Loops turn into squares]

Different

Definitely different, an interesting take on perspective.

TreasurePlanet responds:

thanks

[Hitchhiker Helen]

Confused

The animations were good as well as the art.

Call me a realist but I find it funny how she just doesn't run to the left or right :P

Could you give me a little more insight onto the title?

The only thing i can come up with regards to hitchhiker is, that if she stops running she will become a hitchhiker by being crushed onto it?

IcemanClay responds:

This animation is basically a set assignment in which a character must escape from a serious/life threatening situation. Part of the assignment is to create a character along with a bio and background info.

Helen is a hitchhiker. She's returning from an expedition, when suddenly a boulder up a mountain breaks lose and comes towards her. She runs down the mountain to escape. She gets to the bottom. The boulder therefore slows down, just in time before it knocks her off the cliff. I suppose the rabbit was horny. She didn't run to the left or right because she was running in a straight line down the mountain :P

[Rehab For Fictional Char.]

Good

The jokes were good and the fact that they spoke in song was a nice touch. :)

psychicpebbles responds:

Thanks. If you liked this song you should check out more of his work, he has a bunch of other songs.

[Animal Sk8 Krew Intro]

Not bad,

I found it funny there was an option to skip the intro :P

monsathunta responds:

thnk you for your responce :D

[Gurren Layton]

Not bad.

I think what may be the audio issue is when the voice tracks of the characters are overlayed, it causes their words to become a little diffult to understand fully.

The SFX's were just fine though.

I liked Gureen seires alot, but i cant say I ever heard of that puzzle anime. It does look interesting though.

And I also thought that when they combined that, that screw going down could about kill you if you were tall enough lol.

Linkakami responds:

The series is actually a videogame for the DS with animated cutscenes (though it just got a movie) called Professor Layton. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professo r_Layton

It's a lot of fun--you should play it!

[Blind: Ending theme]

No luck

I never heard of "Blind" I tried searching for it but with no luck.

Too bad really, seemed worth watching =(

exninja123 responds:

lol XD
oh, sorry about that, i forgot to mention that 'Blind' is an original story that I made up

[Hatsune Miku Caipriniha]

Dissidence

The flashes didn't sync well with the audio and this was basically a simple loop.

T-and-J-Productions responds:

I'm well aware of that and didn't I say that this is a loop?

[Short Shorts!]

Liked

I enjoyed them all and I felt their lengths were just fine.

BillyNapalm responds:

Who likes short shorts?

YOU LIKE SHORT SHORTS.

[Too Much Salt]

Salt?

Who puts salt on their sandwiches? :P

The mouth movements were very much in sync to the audio, so good on you there.

Simple yes, but I enjoyed it. Zoom in on face was a good choice.

Hmm...things to improve upon:

*Background: Umm make one, but beware. Dont make it look horrible. I know if you had drawn a shitty background in this flash it would have subtracted greatly with my experience.

I do think you could expand this flash a bit, add some plot. Perhaps make it a little devious and have him hunt down the practical joker who ruined his sandwich and exact revenge?

I do look forward to see you improve and grow as a flash maker.

MrKidNinja responds:

Dude...thanks a bunch! that review was awesome.