Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Birthday DIMB]

Time crunch

Good work on the animations.

I guess you ran into a time crunch and had to give us a text ending? no matter good to see you have some good friends.

YeOldeApple responds:

Yeah, time was rare when trying to make this.

But I'll make a proper ending one day. Thanks for the review.

[Tidbits 2]

Mixed mag

Lol, I will probably be one of the rare few who have watched Saki, and indeed TACOS!

I liked the mixed variety of things and how it was highly random, yet it was clear that effort was given for each sketch.

Wonchop responds:

That's mainly cos each skit was really just individual stuff. The hard part was determining a viewing order that would work as a whole.

[Red Host with Tea]

funny

I liked the scripting, the main problem I had was that at times the text was hard to read. Be it because how it was written or how short it was shown.

SleepilyVivid responds:

Oh, yes. I'll work on that. ^-^ Thanks ! <3

[Sky Kingdom: Promo]

Fixes...

I thought you were copying the idea of that intro, till your audio confirmed it.

As a Promo goes this was not very good.

The audio first and foremost was very bad, I'd hate to watch a series that had that bad a quality.

As well, as for a promo I don't know if you are going to completely copy Koncker's story or branch off or make your own.

The opening art itself was fine, but to end on that crappy castle was a bad decision.

scottwjsm responds:

i could fix the sound. maybe i will...

[Firefly's Wings]

Hmm...

While I can apprciate the time it takes to do things frame by frame...it was only a little yellow dot and then wings were later added.

Could you tell me more about how a firefly relates to tis song, as I don't quite see it.

Kittensinafryingpan responds:

Thanks and I'll try to do more complex animations and the song it's just a really good song that inspired this somehow.

[Office Muffins]

really?

Wait 45 minutes for this? I wonder where all that time went into...

The joke itself is not all to bad but 46 minutes to make lol.

kokonut10 responds:

Huh?

[Tracy Girlsname Trailer]

Potty please

You lost me at the long fart joke.

For a trailer it honestly didn't tell me much about the story and the characters, at best it left me to assume things.

All told, it looks like an interesting thing but..please leave the potty humor behind.

Joey-Kazaam responds:

Yeah, I'm inclined to agree with you that the fart joke really stayed longer than it should have.

I guess a trailer isn't the right word to use for this type of submission. It was just meant to be a test to see what NG thought of it and if I should finish it.

I'm glad you thought it was interesting and hopefully the end product will make you enjoy it more.

[Garden Party Flash]

Incomplete?

Your missing the part where he is actually at the party or did you just not care to animate that part?

From what is there, the animation is fine and so is the art.

greedgame14 responds:

This is Just a Demo, I'm Uploading The Next One In a Couple of Days, Just be Patient! :D

[Mom]

Click

Yep, a little late:P Or just early for next year =O

I liked it, but the having to click to progress the flash was a little annoying.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

It was ment to be like a book/game :)

[PenBattlePT.1]

REview=o

Feedback ya want tis what you get.

The story is fun, w little God like Marker action/

the main issue I have is the lack of continuity between scenes.

I get at the end he was attacked but I am not tracking with the flashing heart things.

i suppose that might be because of the fact this is a work in progress? Even so, it just makes sense to me that you release an entire thing all in one go than in little updated bits (unless it is a large project or you are doing a pilot episode.)

smile373 responds:

Thank you for your comments, and yes, I was planning on making a couple of these.nthis first one I was hoping to test out what worked with the animation. During summer vacation, (4 weeks) I plan to really fine tune the animation, as well as add story onto the beginning and the ending, and the third to have aa very low frame rate, but have really detailed frames. This is my first actal project, and I hope it works.