Silvercrownking's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mom]

Click

Yep, a little late:P Or just early for next year =O

I liked it, but the having to click to progress the flash was a little annoying.

xxxrifrafxxx responds:

It was ment to be like a book/game :)

[Nerd Vs. Bully]

Ha.

This was indeed an epic battle lol.

[those birds]

Good

Very interesting art style.

[end?]

Quality...

This flash betrays itself, the animations were good however the flash is ridiculously pixelated and the audio quality is total trash.

Did you use some compression program or something?

[BTS Opening]

BTS?

What is "BTS"?

I find it fair to say that this is a work in progress, unless you really are that lazy and don't want to color everything?

The blowing air through the hair animation was very choppy I suggest try using tweens.

As well a replay option would be nice,

[PenBattlePT.1]

REview=o

Feedback ya want tis what you get.

The story is fun, w little God like Marker action/

the main issue I have is the lack of continuity between scenes.

I get at the end he was attacked but I am not tracking with the flashing heart things.

i suppose that might be because of the fact this is a work in progress? Even so, it just makes sense to me that you release an entire thing all in one go than in little updated bits (unless it is a large project or you are doing a pilot episode.)

smile373 responds:

Thank you for your comments, and yes, I was planning on making a couple of these.nthis first one I was hoping to test out what worked with the animation. During summer vacation, (4 weeks) I plan to really fine tune the animation, as well as add story onto the beginning and the ending, and the third to have aa very low frame rate, but have really detailed frames. This is my first actal project, and I hope it works.

[Happy Birfday Hulalaoo]

Transitions

I thought the transitions of the different art styles was cool :P

The plot was pretty funny too.

[Boomer RHG test]

Not bad

I don't think the pan out at the end was necessary, since the carnage was already in full view.

The boomerang is an interesting and cool weapon choice.

[Lockday computer troubles]

:P..

Lol, loved the preloader.

The audio at the end was of horrible quality...

The topic of the flash is ironic lol, because it's basicly about you :P

[Its a fishes life!]

*yawn*

The idea of this topic is a bit interesting.

Since the life of a fish is boring and uneventful by a default your flash is boring and uneventful, it cant be helped in this instance.

The art, looked rush by the obvious green lines lol :P but i guess that is more of a style choose than anything since the house was well drawn.

Audio, worked for the given needs.

Animation, good.

Overall, just a boring topic.

Only way this really could have been made better would have been making the fish do something unexpected while the owner was away. Though of course it losses it's realism.